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Angela woke up on Monday morning feeling very tired (though her satin nightie did not help) and rushed to open her window.  This was the day she would get the hottest guy in school, also her brother's best friend, Jorge Garcia, to notice her. She decided to wear a pink sweater vest and a plaid skirt to impress him.

Tony woke up, combed his hair, drank a cup of tea, and was late for the bus, as usual. He barely had enough time to get dressed, and his dad drove him to school. He chilled out with the local classic rock radio station, which was playing "A Day in the Life."  

Achmed sniffed himself and changed his mind about taking a shower, though he did use deodorant.  

Dmitri woke up, took a shower, combed his hair, ate breakfast, got dressed, and brushed his teeth. Like Tony, he was late for the bus, as usual. 
Joey washed up, got dressed, then went down for cereal.

Sam was woken up at 6 am, then went downstairs for pancakes with syrup and two soft-boiled eggs.  She also wiped down her mirror, put on the necklace her friend John got her as a going away present, and took her wet towels off the floor. Like Tony and Dmitri, she was late for the bus, and her mom had to drive her.   

Jorge was late for school, trying to pack his magic book and superhero outfit in a bag. Just in case.

"We are going to do an amazing song when we come into school," he said when she got to school.  "They don't call us the Cool Guys for nothing! Achmed, Tony-"

Oh my god, he said my name! thought Tony to himself.  

"-we will sing the famous Queen song "We Will Rock You." I'll sing the first verse, Tony will sing the second verse, and Achmed will sing the third verse.  And Joey will be saying things like "Sing It!" and "Everybody!" right before we say "We Will Rock You."

Boys, arrange your spots, please."    

All the boys got in their places.

Jorge got a stereo and put it in the middle of the room.  

Tony started to stamp his foot and clap to the beat.

The other two boys clapped.  

"We will, we will-rock you!" said Achmed.  

The boys sang "We Will Rock You."  


Buddy you're a boy make a big noise
Playin' in the street gonna be a big man some day
You got mud on yo' face
You big disgrace
Kickin' your can all over the place

All three:

We will we will rock you
We will we will rock you


Buddy you're a young man hard man
Shoutin' in the street gonna take on the world some day
You got blood on yo' face
You big disgrace
Wavin' your banner all over the place

All three:

We will we will rock you
We will we will rock you


Buddy you're an old man poor man
Pleadin' with your eyes gonna make you some peace some day (Achmed also made a peace sign, and even drew a peace sign on his wrist the day before)
You got mud on your face
You big disgrace
Somebody better put you back in your place

All three:

We will we will rock you
We will we will rock you

Achmed played the guitar solo at the end.  

Suddenly, Dmitri banged his hand down on the piano.

"Dmitri, WHAT ARE YOU DOING HERE?!" said Jorge.  

"Nothing," said Dmitri.

"They why'd you start hitting the piano RIGHT AFTER WE FINISHED THE SONG!"

"I just wanted a part in the song!"  

"Yeah, yeah, yeah. You know, Dmitri, I have a deep, dark secret.

"What is it?"

"I'm…actually a magic boy."  

"Well, your secret's safe with me, Jorge."  


Suddenly, the bell rang.  

All five boys went to class.

Suddenly, the loudspeaker came on.

"All auditionees for chorus class please report to the auditorium now."  

Jorge, Tony, and Dmitri left the room to go to the auditorium.  

The music teacher for the chorus auditions was a brunette, semi-Japanese man in a flannel shirt, vest, hat with a feather, and brown pants and shoes.  

"I have a song that will TEAR THE ROOF OFF THIS PLACE!" said Tony.  

The music teacher sat there in silence, very shocked.  

Jorge sighed. "That's Tony for you...;"  

Tony sang "You Ain't Seen Nothing Yet" for his audition.  

"Tony-you're in!" said the music teacher.    

"Tony's always been a big ham," said Jorge.  

"Of course. Dude, you ain't seen nuthin' yet!" said Tony.  


"Like I said, that's Tony for you."  

"Et tu, Jorge?" said the music teacher.  

"I have a nice song for the audition…" said Jorge.  

Jorge sang "One After 909" for his audition.  

"Wow, Jorge, you're even better than Tony! You're also in chorus."

Jorge just smiled.  

Dmitri also auditioned for chorus.  

"Well, any guy who looks like Elton John has to be at least somewhat talented."  

"You bet!" said Dmitri.  "In fact, I'll sing one of his songs right now!

Dmitri sang "Crocodile Rock."  

"Wow Dmitri, for a nerd, you can surely sing your heart out! You're in!"  

After school, Tony's little sister Angela told him "I'm going to get Jorge to notice me, then he'll be all mine for me to take to the Spring Fling by the end of the year." It was going to be Angela's first dance, and she didn't want to be single for it.
"But of course you will, Angie," said Tony, sarcastically.  

"I will! Just you wait and see!" Angela snapped back.  

She saw Jorge walking out of school, and walked up to him, looking up at his face and having her hands behind her back together.

"Well hello, tall, dark, and handsome!"  

He just walked on by.  

On the bus ride home, Angela told Tony "You was right, Tony. I can't see how a tall drink of water like him would go out with an overly cute, immature babyface like me. I suck."

"I couldn't agree more," said Tony. "Besides, he's my best friend, and kids these days just don't date they best friends' little sisters. In other words, I told ya so."    

"Oh well," said Angela.

They were bickering on the bus about what song to listen to (they shared an Ipod.) Tony wanted to listen to the Beatles but Angela wanted to listen to Avril Lavigne.  

"Calling Avril Lavigne rock is like calling pizza a vegetable.  This is the REAL THING!"

"But I LIKE Avril Lavigne!"   

The two bickered, but eventually negotiated on Avril's cover of John Lennon's "Imagine."  
This chapter describes Monday morning, where Jorge, Tony and Achmed sing the most epic rock song ever. Also, Jorge tells Dmitri his secret. Will Dmitri keep his promise? What's more, Jorge, Tony, and Dmitri audition for chorus, and Angela tries to flirt with Jorge. She got weird taste for boys lol. Just like me. Oh well.
Nice. For a Backyard Sports fanfiction I find this very good.

One question though: Why Jorge?
He was always one of my favorite characters.
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